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Clay Campbell wrote in his Canadian Small Business post Unrealistic Expectations, that it’s "what the ad says, that determines the success of the campaign." Here’s a simple technique that you can use to improve your writing. It applies to ad copy, but also to letters and brochures as well as anything you write.
Ask your client to describe how people use their product or service. Write down all the verbs they use in their descriptions. Then using your imagination, a thesaurus or a dictionary, substitute the verbs with more powerful ones. You now possess a list of exciting and engaging verbs with which to craft your ads. For letters or brochures, after writing the first draft, pick out the verbs and apply the same technique.
You’ll discover very quickly that instead of laying flat, your writing will start to jump off the page with it’s own energy and verve.
Cheers
Steve
In the continuing look at how digital tools are changing the images we look at in everyday advertising, here is the site of photographer Brian Dilg (click here) with explanations of what he has done to revamp the images. As you mouse over the images on his site you can look at the original photo and compare it with the re-done version. Fantastic talent!
Cheers, Steve
"Nine times out of ten, the advertising message made more sense to the client than the consumer."
From Wizard Academy Grad- Mick Torbay
In the radio industry, we are guilty as charged. The focus of most advertising is on the client with their fast fair and friendly staff or their pathetic product line or their claim of "giving great service for over 67 years." Who really cares? Not the consumer and certainly not Broca’s area of the brain that hears all that drivel and blocks it from entering the brain.
To get past the gatekeeper, your ads must focus on the one thing consumers care about, themselves. If your ad answers the question, "what’s in it for them?" then your ad has a much higher chance of working. If you are an advertiser, get to it and get it fixed today.
Cheers
Steve
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